??紧接着上次的哦

【二】并列句的满分句型
一、and / but 句型(大作文一个,小作文一个)
1、and 并且——> likewise / in the meanwhile

2、but 但是—— > conversely / nevertheless / by contrast

3、推荐写在作文的第一段,描述一幅图、两
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个主体、两个动作或者两幅图时使用

【拓展】描述图画的分类

一幅图

一个主体、两个动作

两个主体、两个动作

两幅图

【注意】在描述图画时,除非有非常明显的过去的时间,描述图画都用现在进行时,比较生动;在描述图表时,如果没有明确的现在的时间,都用一般过去时

eg:在图片中守门员把自己想得很渺小,但是足球运动员把他想象的的很高大

in the picture, the goalkeeper is imagining himself exceedingly small. on the contrary, the soccer player is assuming his rival as big as mountain/hill.

eg:在第一幅图中,温室里的花朵生长的很健康。但是,在第二幅图中,这朵花在风雨中凋零

in the former picture, the flower in the greenhouse is growing healthing . by contrast, in the latter one, it is dying.

换词:picture——>cartoon(卡通图片)、drawing、painting 、caricature(漫画,比较夸张的图画)、photograph(照片)

【小窍门】多用带刺代替已经出现过的名词哦~

二、not only … but also 不但,而且本句型推荐写在作文第二段,分析原因时使用
eg: 养宠物能够减少老人的孤单

raising pets can reduce the loneliness of senior citizens .——句子1

raising pets can cultivate the kindness of kids.——句子2

把两个句子合成一个句子,变长一点

raising pets not only can reduce the loneliness of senior citizens , but also can cultivate the kindness of kids.

eg:孝敬父母不但是中华民族的传统美德,而且是子女的法定义务

supporting the elderly not only keeps a chinese conventional virtue , but also proves the legal responsibility of their offspring.

eg:合作的好处:合作不但能使我们交到更多的朋友,而且还可以获得更大的成功——万金油的说法,可以用来描述任何一件好事哦~

cooperation not only enables all children and adults to make more intimate friends but also has them achieve greater glories/credits.

credit——表扬,嘉奖,荣誉使某人做某事——enable sb. to do sth. / have sb. do sth.

【三】复合句的满分句型
一、名词性从句——主语从句
1)主语从句的满分表达就是把主语从句放句末,加?it 作为形式主语,即 it…that句型

it keeps my perspective that 我认为 = i think that

it seems beyond dispute that 显而易见,众所周知的

(大作文一个,小作文一个)

2)更好的主语从句的变体是把?it ——> what , 在 that 前 + is

what keeps my perspective is that….

what seems beyond dispute that…

what 引导的主语从句 + that引导的表语从句

3)本句型可以写在作文中任何一句话的前面,用来拉长句子。本句型推荐写在第一段第一句话前面,用来引出描述图片/图表(大作文)

下期给大家带来写作专题——二、同位语和同位语从句????

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